Your work is missing a thesis and citations in each paragraph. You are required to have at least three sources that come from peer reviewed journal articles. Please make sure you have them in the final essay to avoid losing more points. Use a 12 point font and do not use bold.Indent each paragraph 0.5 spaces. Avoid writing questions in an academic essay. Please remove all questions from this paper. When you see these words (citation is needed here) it means that a citation must be included with this claim. If you do not have a citation for the claim then you have to remove it from your work. You are missing a thesis. It should be the last sentence in the introductory paragraph. It must have a position and three sub arguments. Avoid using first and second person (I, you, me, we, you, our) in academic writing Remove all first and second person words from the essay. Only use third person. Make this correction throughout the essay. Please review the information on the following link. https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/560/15/ For academic papers, you should not use contractions. Please correct all contractions in this essay. Is this your thesis? If it is, your essay does not follow it. You need a thesis to match the paragraphs in this paper. Your references are not written correctly. Please make sure to review GCU style guide for writing correct in-text citations and references. You can find it in Classroom under the tab called Resources and then click on Add-ons. There is an additional document called References that will also help you to write correct in-text citations and references. In addition, you can go to https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/ Please put References on a new page at the end of the essay.