I am writing a persuasive essay about how i am against public shaming as well as an analysis of online situations in So You′ve Been Publicly Shamed by Jon Ronson. Which I have some listed with explaination I need: – better format – information to help lengthen essay – thesis relating to why online shaming is bad and what causes it – quotes related to public shaming relating to thesis – can not use ″I, me, my, you, we″ – use ″people, others″ – for quotes ″quote″ (who said it, page number or paragraph number) – sources to be used on work cited –