Your response to other students′ posts should directly reference their essay and, in addition to general feedback about the piece as a whole, be sure to also offer suggested solutions for their self-defined struggles. Amy Jones in response to this Topic: The essay I foresee having them most difficulty revising is the reportage essay. I would like to add some dialog, and more desсrіptive details but as always I struggle to get words on the page. I think I would like to add some of my own bias on the subject of the name change but originally I wrote it without any so I am not sure how I would incorporate it. I really found the peer feedback helpful on the personal essay but didn’t get any on the reportage essay. I find it easy to get stuck when I have read and reread the piece so many times.